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Shadow Katt`s Information
Real Name: Shadow Katt
Rank: Basic Trancer
Status: Healthy
Join Date: April 14, 2009
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Country: U.S.A.
Mood: Annoyed
Artist Type: Critic
Region: Nocturnal Riot
Career: Slacker
Website: Visit
Trances: 0
Literature: 0
Comments: 80
Trancer Comments Received: 12
Forum Posts: 7
Journal Entries: 28
Policy Violations: 0

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# 674

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
April 27, 2010 07:04:27 AM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=95
You`ve hit it square on.

When I have people act the way they do, it is all based on people really do react and feel, working with basic human psychology. It may not always be pretty, but it`s nature, so to speak.

 

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# 673

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
April 12, 2010 07:07:21 PM


 

Back to checking back on the comments you left for me.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=94
Indeed, it`s a total setup of things to come.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=93
The Babylon Rogues have never been on the side of Eggman, even in the games.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=92
With so many captured, there certainly is a reason for it.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=91
Something to keep in mind about Maria - she has been on the Ark all of her life, she is not street smart and is naive about things as a result. Believing the best in everyone, she easily trusts others. So if Shadow pops up with an idea, she`s going to easily go with it.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=90
You can bet your head that guy won`t be coming back.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=89
As far into the chapters you have gotten, you should now know why MetalSonic was there.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=88
I felt she was deserving a break after all she has been through.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=87
Big is the perfect size for a football member so it`s only appropriate he get into it, make some use of him. As for the woman, she will be back.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=86
Now if only others were the same way.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=85
Silver isn`t such a bad guy, and the rep he gets with the fans is too rough. I know I don`t play him perfect either but he certainly has his good points.

 

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# 669

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
February 28, 2010 06:59:33 PM


 

http://www.secrettrance.net/chapter.php?id=190
It was mainly to show the level of innocence the two of them have and the sort of bond that is forming between them.

http://www.secrettrance.net/chapter.php?id=145
I rather felt the same way when I wrote the chapter.

http://www.secrettrance.net/chapter.php?id=149
Nice, love the reference to the other Sonic the Human story.

 

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# 663

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
January 14, 2010 09:20:39 PM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=76
Quite a lot happens - you just need to keep your eyes open and pay attention to what`s happening.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=77
Ohhh I worked hard to make that one perfect.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=78
Well comedy needs to be stuck in there to keep a situation from being more serious than it needs to be. And those two are in the best positions for executing such moves.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=80
Yep, you can`t forget the main villain, especially since he was the one who started the big mess in the first place.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=81
Glad you feel that way about the scene since that was the intention of it.

 

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# 662

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
January 7, 2010 04:16:48 PM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=74
This sounds more like a summary than a review but thanks for the comment.

 

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# 658

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
December 29, 2009 01:55:24 PM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=61
Indeed. Shadow has total trust in her so he`s going to follow her every word. She is more knowledged than him on the health situation, afterall.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=62
Oh yah. Just wait for the later chapters to roll in.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=63
It`s a window into the times of when Shadow was young and happy.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=64
Gerald takes the role of a parent - he`d rather see them learn something rather than going around handing out punishments. He did create Shadow for her, afterall. Gerald isn`t stupid. *wink*

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=65
In any story, even ones involving pre-existing characters, it is important to establish the characters.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=66
Yep, in the world of Sonic, peace is short-lived.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=67
Desperate times call for desperate measures. When an emergency situation pops up, such as Maria with NIDS being held in filthy conditions and suffering a wound, there isn`t time to develop strategy.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=68
Eggman is selfish - and he will do what it takes to get what he wants, no matter what consequence it is to others.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=69
Yah - he finally got something back he lost a long time ago and has to immediately give it up.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=70
They are co-workers so to speak, so they have had to deal with each other quite a bit. But that certainly doesn`t mean that Shadow will just open up to her about his personal life.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=71
It was important to show what everyone else thought of the situation.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=72
Yah - even though it`s their job to help people, hospitals aren`t free.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=73
Indeed, as Shadow is still in the role of trying to get things figured out.

Finally got caught up on the responses. As always, thanks for the comments.

 

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# 643

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
November 5, 2009 03:10:00 PM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=60
That`s a pretty good analogy.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=59
His speed is granted to him through those hover shoes; it`s not natural like Sonic`s.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=58
It goes to show all the more what was taken from him when GUN shot Maria.

 

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# 641

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
October 26, 2009 06:21:35 PM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=57
Nice to be getting reviews again. I`ll be catching up on making responses to all of yours.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=55
It is strange but at the same time, everyone has started off at that infant stage. Even Shadow.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=52
It`s more than just her that he is in control of himself.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=51
Nope, not one bit. When you`re raised with science projects since birth, you wouldn`t find them unusual or frightening.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=50
Yes, to show why Gerald made the decisions that he did. He wasn`t just some crazed old man, he was actually following his heart.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=44
I felt it was necessary to explain why she knew him before everyone else. Even though I have yet to continue on the idea for this story (though one day I will), it was an important piece to get down for everyone.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=43
Thanks, I tried to give both sides an equal force since in the games they were meant to be very alike.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=42
Nice joke on an event that happened in an earlier chapter. XD

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=41
Sonic is angry at Shadow because of his jealously that Amy is directing her attention towards him instead.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=39
It is both but more of 2 than 1.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=38
Excellent - that was the feel I was going for with this chapter.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=37
Jet is nothing more than a bully: making others feel bad to make himself feel good. He wants to be on top and if chipping away at his rival`s team is the way to do it, that`s the road he`ll take.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=36
They are less cartoony because I write my stories to appeal to an older audience than what Sonic is typically aimed for.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=35
It`s to show how everyone is evolving with the events that are happening. Some for the better and others...not so good.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=34
It makes Sonic mad because that suddenly the attention he had is directed elsewhere and he`s starting to see that he took that attention for granted. Now, he has on mass of a rival to contend with in order to get that attention back.

 

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# 605

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
July 4, 2009 07:22:27 PM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=29
I remember that story piece you wrote up.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=30
The tricky part is giving Shadow a personality without making him seem like everyone else. Shadow`s base personality is "dark and quiet" which is quite tricky to work with.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=31
You may be seeing something like that again.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=32
The best way to roll things along is slowly to leave the audience to watch it grow, like a plant.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=33
I`m thinking of taking this idea and using something similar to it for one of the other Sonic the Human series. I`m not going to say which one though.

 

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# 601

Beloved Doll
Administrator Trancer
June 10, 2009 10:05:27 PM


 

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=25
I think this is one of the best descriptive comments you have given me. You`ve set the bar higher for yourself so now I`m going to expect more comments like this from you.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=27
I like the first sentence of yours and isn`t something I usually see from you. See comment response above. You do well with these reviews.

http://secrettrance.net/comment3.php?id=28
I like Wave as well, despite how much of a bitch she is. She has a different personality from the other girls that makes her stand out, as nearly every single female character in Sonic does. She has an element to her that works for my stories so I use it to the full extent. But I also have a sense of justice so her rise on top only lasts for so long.

 

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