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Pokemon: Whispering Shadows by Beloved Doll
Beloved Doll

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A pokemon traner by the name of Gregory is approaching what appears to be a large farm. There`s a house on this land & next to it is a building that almost looks like a factory. There`s a lot of land with tall fencing around it. This is no ordinary farm. This is a pokemon farm.

The girl whos owns this pokemon farm not only breeds pokemon, but trains them, as well. She is quite rich though most of her money gets spent on her pokemon. Many trainers & breeders come from across the world for her pokemon. Some come to purchase pokemon from her; she`s been known to breed the top quality pokemon. Others cme to challenge her to a battle. She`s tough though, very few have been able to defeat her.

Gregory has come to her farm to purchase a pokemon from her & to challenge her to a match. He comes to the entrance but it is all locked up. Looking to his left, he sees a panel. He presses a button on it & speaks to it,"Hi, my name is Gregory. I`ve come to see your pokemon & to challenge you to a match."

No answer comes. But the gates make a few sounds & open up. Gregory steps through & enters the farm. Then the gates close behind him & lock. Gregory looks around. No human in sight. Or pokemon, for that matter.

He decides to check the house. Stepping onto the porch of the house, Gregory fees a blanket of darkness here. It sends a chill up his spine. But he presses forward. He swallows & then rings the doorbell.

Who answers the door is unknown to Gregory. The man stands there, peeking around the side of the door. He seems to be a dark person. His eyes are empty,"You are here to challenge Whisper, correct?"

"Yes, I am."

The man looks at Gregory in silence for a moment. Then he says,"Go to the back. She will meet you there."

"Thank you."

The man closes the door. Gregory looks at the door for a moment thinking about how odd that experience was. Gregory then walks around the house to get to the back of it.

Once in the back, Gregory sees an arena all set up. He picks one side & stands in the trainer`s block. Out from the back door of the house comes a girl.

She looks a bit older than Gregory. Her long blonde hair hangs loosely down. The blonde fades into black tips. Her clothes are all black. Currently, she has on a corset trenchcoat on which is covering her clothes underneath.

She stands in her trainer`s block & removes her trenchcoat. Her clothing now consists of a spaghetti stringed corset top with a fishnet top underneath. She also has on really baggy pants that have chains all over it. There is a pixie skirt over top of the pants. The boots are steel-tipped knee-high boots. She has on arm warmers & a spiked collar.

Her face is painted up with black lips, black eye makeup. She looks like she just stepped out of a movie.

A mewtwo walks with her to her block. He has on spiked wristbands. He, too, has his face painted up. He stands next to the girl.

Gregory looks to them both in confusion. The girl says to him,"I am Whisper. This battle will be six on six. Choose your first pokemon."

Gregory pauses a moment. She`s quick & direct. Quite differet from the other trainers he had battled. Nonetheless, he sets out his togetic. Whisper sets out her vulpix.

First, Gregoryhas his togetic use ancient power. But vulpix dodges it & unleashes fire blast. Togetic is knocked back & burned. Vulpix wins.

Whisper smiles & vulpix walks up to her. Whisper kneels down & feeds something to vulpix. Then Whisper stands up,"Choose your next."

Now Gregory sends his steelix as Whisper sends her mew. Gregory smirks,"A psychic is no good against steel."

Whisper looks sharply at Gregory. Mew performs metronome, which this time, the attack is super power. Steelix is knocked clearly out of the ring. Mew has won, giving Whisper another victory. Whisper feeds mew something, the same thing she had given vulpix.

Gregory balls his hands in fists. She is very good & her pokemon are super powerful. He looks to Whisper,"How about just one last round?"


"Whoever wins this round, wins the whole match."

"All right."

Gregory looks at his pokeballs. Which one is his most powerful? He smiles at one pokeball in particular. He tosses it into the ring & it releases his golem.

Whisper looks at mewtwo. He smiles to her & steps forward to where he is to stand for the battle.

Gregory tells his golem to use earthquake. Golem jumps up & back down on the ground, causing earthquake. Mewtwo is shaken a step back but then he regains himself & stands straight up again. Mewtwo`s eyes glow & he raises his hand. Golem is lifted up into the air then it`s thrown into a tree. It takes a moment but golem gets back up to it`s feet. It`s sturdy ability has really helped it out a lot. Golem curls up in a ball & rolls at mewtwo. Mewtwo prepares himself to block but then golem stops right in front of mewtwo. Mewtwo blinks at golem, caught off-guard by it stopping. Golem uses it`s self-destruct attack. Mewtwo is blown back. He lands on his back & skids across the ground a bit before coming to a stop.


Whisper runs from her block & runs up to mewtwo. She kneels down by his side. Mewtwo lifts his top half off the ground, leaning on one arm. His free hand raises up & rubs his forehead. Whisper smiles,"You made it!"

She hugs him around his neck. Mewtwo smiles from the hug. When Whisper releases him, she stands up & so does Mewtwo. He uses recover to heal himself. Gregory is crushed now. He thought he had won but Whisper has won once more. Now, she has won the whole match.

Whisper walks up to Gregory with her mewtwo following behind her. As Whisper stands in front of Gregory, mewtwo is standing to the side of her but yet behind her, like a body guard. Gregory notices something else, too. This mewtwo looks different. Is it even a real mewtwo?

Whisper speaks to Gregory,"You didn`t win the reward but you did make quite an impact on that last match. So I`ll give you...a...twenty percent discount."

"Oh, thank you."

"Come with me."

Whisper leads Gregory to the other building, with mewtwo following. Whisper opens up the door to this other building.

What a sight inside!

There are millions of pokemon inside. Different species are in seperate pens. Many mother pokemon are curled up in a bed taking care of their babies. All of the pokemon are lively; they are running about, making their sounds, playing with one another, eating, napping. One would think they have died and gone to pokemon heaven.

Gregory`s mouth drops opens at this site. He has been to pokemon breeders before but they usually concentrate on one to three species. But this girl, it looks like she is dealing with nearly all the species there is!

As Gregory looks around at al the pokemon, Whisper speaks up,"Any species you are interested in acquiring?"

"Oh a slaking would be awesome!"

"Mm, I don`t sell my top pokemon to just anyone. But I can get you a slakoth you can raise up to a slaking."

"Hm, yeah, that might be better. Then I can teach it whatever moves I want it to."

"It would be better bonded with you as well. The younger the better."


Gregory leaves the property with his pokeball containing his new slakoth. He smiles happily at his new pokemon.

The mewtwo looks at Whisper as the gates to Whisper`s property closes behind Gregory. Whisper looks back at him,"Let`s have dinner now, then get some sleep, Shadow."

The mewtwo nods is head, a small smile forming on his face. Whisper looks to the other humans,"Wrap up tonight`s care, get everyone situated for the night."

As Whisper walks back to the house, the mewtwo, Shadow, follows her,"Are we still going to travel on our journey?"

"Yes...I want to be returned to normal. Sitting here will not accomplish this."

"I hope we can get that accomplished."

Shadow looks to Whisper,"I miss you being the way you were."

Whisper looks back to Shadow,"I miss it, too..."

To be continued...

Literature Details

Title: Chapter 1: Beginning Trials
Category: Prose->Fiction->FanFiction
Date: September 21, 2007 05:12:30 PM
From: Pokemon: Whispering Shadows
Views: 540

Rating: 9.17 (6 votes)
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