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The Red Ball by Pandie the Panda
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Still wandering in the forest is the girl with the purple eyes, still throwing the ball and giggling.

Back at Sorinas high school, Sorinas still asleep in detention the teacher goes over to her desk and bangs a book on it "Sorina... Sorina wake up this instint, detention is over... i want to go home!" Sorina jumps up at the banging of the book on her desk and gets up "ok Mis... um... Smith..." the teacher with a look of disapointment on her face says "its Mis Kily, and you should know ive had you for a year now and you always arrgue with me" Sorina smiles and blushes "oh right Mis Kily.. thats what i ment, and i argue with all my teachers so dont take it personaly" she mumbles "cuz all my teachers are wrong..." Mis Kily glares at her and before she has a chance to say anything Sorina runs out of the class. On her way home she gets drawn into the forest. Sorina gets off her bike and walks deep into the forest she gets to where the little girl is with the red ball and she says "hello there, i didnt know anybody else would be in this forest something just drawled me in..." interupted by the girl "so your the the one?... not much to you..." Sorina starts to say "what do you mean..." but in the mibble of her sentance the girl drops the ball and Sorina falls to the ground, shes hard of breathing and cant move, her breaths get shortter and shortter untill she falls into a coma. The little girl mumbles "yep thats her" and walks away from the ball to hide behind the tree. Meanwhile at the club house a knock at the door wakes Clayton "what... whos there?" he transforms into his human form and walks to the window, his eyes widen as he sees Landon, he runs over and opens the door widly "hey Landon!!! long time no see, finaly your back, i was getting tiered of living with just a girl. You dont know how anoying Sorina is untill you live with just her for a few months." Landon smiles and walks in, sees the note on the lab door and starts to say "where is Sori..." hes inturupted by Clayton "i wander where Sorina is now? her detention ended like an hour ago" Clayton goes to the phone and calls the high school "no answer...." then he calls Sorinas cell phone "still no answer... do you think somthing happened to her?" Landon throws the note away and says "lets go look around for her" they both go out of the club house and split up looking for her. Clayton not that far from Lanbon sees Sorina's bike in front of the froest "Landon i think i found her" Landon runs over to him, Clayton says "she has to be in this forest somewhere, lets search it" About an half hour later they are in deep, and Landon finaly spots Sorina "here she is!" they both run over to her and Clayton picks her up "i hope shes ok, lets get her back to the lab" Landon says nervisly. Back at the lab Clayton asks "so whats wrong with her?! is she going to be ok?!!? Sora? Landon is she ok!!!!?" Landon looks at Clayton "calm down shes just in a coma, im trying to find out whats wrong with her but nothing seems wrong" At the forest the little girl comes out from behid the tree and giggles "perfect, it all went acording to plan.... my plan" she laughs evily then picks the ball back up and starts throwing it after the third throw Sorina Starts comming back. Back at the lab, Claytons yelling "Sora.... Sora!!! wake up!!!SORA!!!!" and Lanbon doing his best to keep him clam. Sorina starts to breath again the wakes up and says with the only energy she has "i havent heard you call me that in decads... oh Landon your back, good to see you" she smiles. Landon now with a smile on his face too says "you better save your energy" "yeah" Clayton jumps in "and ill tell you all about what happened after you take a rest" Clayton grads her and caries her to her room and lays her on her bed. Sorina smils and blushes "you realy didnt have to do that" "yes i did" Clayton says smiling "now get your rest, me and Landon will explain more when you wake" Sorina smiles and giggles a little at his bad english then falls asleep. Clayton walks to the living room where Landon is just sitting there in deep thought, he stares at him for a little while then walks into his room and locks the door. There he has a whole bunch of work out equitment so he decides to lift weights while thinking about Sorina.

Literature Details

Title: The red balls effects
Category: Prose->Fiction->Fantasy
Date: January 26, 2008 11:01:40 PM
From: The Red Ball
Views: 516

Rating: 8 (4 votes)
Comments: 2

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Beloved Doll
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February 16, 2008 11:03:56 AM


 

When do we get to see chapter 3? o_o

 

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# 12

Beloved Doll
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January 26, 2008 11:31:00 PM


 

You should break this up into several paragraphs - that`ll make it easier to read.

Otherwise, this is coming along well and it looks like so far you are playing Landon`s role well.

 

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